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Prologue, The Choice

Part 1; The Choice

Part 2; The Choice

Part 3; The Choice

Part 4; The Choice

Part 5; The Choice

Loving a Wall (A Poem that Doesn't Rhyme)

The Love of Alexandra in 99 words

Love; Part 1

Rain

The Suicide Love Poem

Confusion

Shouting Out to the World

Two Poems of Lonely Origin

The Story of the Tree of Life

The Tragedy of Commitment

Bread of Thought

Expectations

A Week Without Cents











The Tragedy of Commitment

I gather that you'd rather
Flit and patter to and fro.
To run away instead of stay,
The better path to go.


Instead of going through with it,
You run and dance and dodge.
Think that it disappears,
But in myself the action is in lodge.


I believed you to be different,
While I prayed night and day.
I thought much older of you
When you decided to stay.


But when the effects of commitment
Came crashing on your head,
You turned and flew
And left me to be alone instead



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