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THE ONLY SOUL I'LL KEEP FOREVER

How can I ever forget this amazing someone who gave me so much joy bringing out the best in me? How can I put her into oblivion when she renewed my enthusiasm and brought my feet back to the ground? How can I fail her in mind when she made a huge difference in my life when she was the sole reason why I fell head over heels in love once again? Surely, I will always reminisce the maiden who took the risk in order to love and accept me for who I am, the extraordinary soul who took the time to reach out and feel my pain in her heart. She puts me on top of the world and let me perceive heaven amidst adversity and emotional hurt.

I was into the brink of depression when Vivian came along on June 26 this year. I wasn't enjoying the things I used to do anymore because I was severely heart-broken. I thought I couldn't get over the woman who was spineless enough to try and stay with me but Vivian's exceptional friendship and camaraderie, sweetness, compassion, unique way of reaching out and extreme thoughtfulness made me adore her in no time. Who wouldn't admire this one-of-a-kind special gift from heaven? She is very beautiful, smart, highly-educated, seductive, romantic, with tantalizing eyes and does possess the sweetest smile on earth with irresistible magnetism. Oh, she is too awesome and marvelous!

I have written several love poems for my girl describing my intense feeling and devotion but as I often emphasize, no amount of words and figure of speech can depict the excessive happiness I felt since the day she passed by and later on, learned to love me too. This woman of passion is very patient, a poet like me, is broadminded and has a charming beauty that turns me on each time I think of her.

I came to realize that of all the people who were romantically involved with me, Vivian is the real love of my love and the best lover I ever have. And I'm pretty sure that by the way I treasure and adore her, my affection and respect for her will not fade nor diminish anymore.


-SALLIE/102104



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